The Right Name

Have you ever noticed that pretty much any name that you here seems to “fit” as their description? There’s rarely ever a case where you hear a name that just doesn’t sound right, or a name that you think to yourself, “they look more like a ____.” One reason I believe that is true though, is because once you’re used to saying a person’s name, it’s hard to change the habit.

In a book, you must have the right name to match with their personality. It usually doesn’t just come to you, but you must think carefully of a name that will fit the role of the character. For instance, a nerdy person would have a different name than a trouble maker. You can’t just suggest the name Ned, and say it could be used for either of those characterizations.

It took me a while to come up with the name “Darren” for my story “The Arrival” and although it”s not the best name, I think it fits pretty well. Speaking if which, I need some new names for people in “The Arrival” that have about the same personality, but with some different physical characteristics of Darren. I would love to here any ideas that anybody reading this post may have! Just comment on this post on what you think some of the character names should be. 🙂

The Arrival Continued

“I can’t wait for tomorrow,” Thought Darren as he began to walk to his car. The SEFER (space exploration for energy resources) division had accepted his idea for harnessing the energy from coronal loops, the loops of blazing matter that form on the sun’s surface due to the magnetic forces of the star. The loops would be far enough from the sun, and cool enough to extract the materials from it, and then transform the heat energy into enough electrical energy to power the entire state of Texas for an entire day.

The people in charge of the SEFER division had decided on Darren’s idea as the best months ago, but the announcement had not been made until today so that the preparation for the mission could be finished, and the scientist with the winning idea would be surprised to find that he or she would be going into space to conduct their experiment the next day. That night Darren had barely managed to fall asleep. He was up late studying experiment procedures, and the excitement of his opportunity kept him up for even longer.

The next day he was ready to go into space. After running through the checklist a billion times, it was time for launch. With newly invented technology, Darren would be put to sleep after breaking through the Earth’s atmosphere, and would wake when he reached the sun the next day. When Darren woke up, the sight was amazing. Shielded by goggles that prevented the Sun from blinding your eyes, to Darren, the sun looked like a beautiful sunset.

As Darren began to get closer to the coronal loop, something was beginning to look “off.” Instead of the loop expanding from the sun, Darren saw it as if one side of the loop was going out of the sun, while the other side was being pulled in. Kind of like how serpents or “river monsters” come out of the water.

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After getting a bit closer Darren almost fainted after seeing something else, and he said to himself, “Are those…scales?!?”

 

Paralyzed with awe, Darren was unable to move the shuttle as the “tail” end of the coronal loop whipped up and spewed out fumes of crimson red smoke onto the ship. Able to move again, Darren tried frantically to get away, but then became paralyzed again, this time with fear, as alarms began screeching that the hull had been breached. The smoke was eating away the hull, but instead of being sucked into the vacuum of space, the smoke began invading the ship, and was being inhaled by Darren.

The next instant, Darren’s mind began fogging up, and his whole life flashed before his eyes. Darren’s entire life, from birth, to walking, winning the science fair, discovering the hardest mineral in the word- skiraine, being accepted into SEFER, and leading up to the experiment he doing right now. Then, the world went black, but Darren wasn’t dead yet…

The Arrival

All over the planet are people. A handful of these people though, are not humans. We look like them, talk like them, and we act like them. We are the same, just “different.” Except for one thing; we are connected. The regular human beings argue and fight over every little thing, but not us. Our mind is joined together, making our actions 100% efficient. Today, only one action is to be made, taking over the world. The command has been ordered, we know what has come, and slowly, the sky got darker.

A Trustworthy Device

I really enjoy the school iPads. They are helpful for school assignments, they teach me about modern technology, and I have to admit, I play plenty of games on there too. A lot of adults don’t like kids like me to be playing too many video games. I agree with the statement of too much gaming, but not for the reason that it “rots your brain.” I think that playing video games allows you to play with friends, learn strategy which stimulates your brain, and my favorite excuse: hand-eye coordination. It’s still not healthy to play video games all day though. Your body needs exercise to stay healthy.

The main thing about iPads that is just sad, is how secretive you can be in class. Before electronics, people could play board games and card games for entertainment. At school, teachers would easily be able to notice if you had a deck of cards out, if you were talking to a friend, or if you were cheating on a test off of a piece of paper. Now teachers can’t tell if everyone is on task, playing games, messaging friends, or searching the internet during an iPad assignment, because switching apps can happen with just a flick of the wrist.

To solve this problem, the school came up with the iPad oath, which states that you’re not permitted to play on your iPad while in class, unless the teacher says otherwise (something like that). This would have worked perfectly, except for the fact that not everyone obeys the iPad oath and they never get caught breaking it. The people who do this think that it’s just playing games, but while that is true, these people have also crossed the line of honesty.

Last year, when the iPad-tech-people came to make sure no one was jail breaking their iPad, they found that all the students had their restrictions on(which was good). As soon as they left, about 1/6 of the class said that they had their restrictions turned off and turned them back on right before the check. They were relieved that there wasn’t a way to check for that and that they didn’t get caught. As we are developing new ways of technology to help with new learning and discoveries that expand our knowledge…

Technology is advancing faster than our systems of discipline can keep up with.

Preposition Poem 2

Aboard the Star Command’s most prized ship
In the captain’s chair
Beside him stands Commander Spock
In front of him, a weapon of destruction, from the future
Off in the far reaches of space, being the only 2 ships in the sector
As the deadly ship is gravitating towards a black hole
With nobody there to help
Besides the USS Enterprise
Except the enemy is not willing to surrender
At that moment, Captain Kirk gives one order to ensure the safety of the galaxy
“Fire everything we’ve got!”